Im just curious, is anyone readung my novel?

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), February 02, 2005

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I'm just curious, is anyone Reading my novel?

I ask because I can stop posting it and save server space if this is preferable, I just thought it was something nice for the forum.

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), February 02, 2005.

I am, Zarove.

Sameres has how many parts?

The Christian Yahwist

-- Elpidio Gonzalez (egonval@yahoo.com), February 02, 2005.

Its a novel, I intend to publkish it. ( if not with Pocketbooks, then I will edit out the Star Trek refeences, thats why there are so few, and why no main charecters form the other series show up).

Overall ian estimated 30 chapters will be posted, once per wednesday, till chapter ten, then I will see what everone htinks.

After a breif discussion, Ill write the middle part ofthe sory, then post it, then the last , and post it.

I shoudl be done ( schedual permitting) by the end of April or sooner.

So what do you think thusfar of the events laid out?

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), February 02, 2005.

Let you know by Friday, Zarove. I need to grapple with the plot of the story.

I have to finish grades today.

So far I like the way the dialogues are laid out.

The Christian Yahwist

-- Elpidio Gonzalez (egonval@yahoo.com), February 02, 2005.

ZAR,

your dialogue IS good.

the descriptions are good, but do they serve a purpose? what i mean to say is that sometimes one can overdescribe and it takes away from the plot and sometimes the descriptive nature of a story adds to the story. i actually do like the atmosphere that you create, it's like i AM watching a sci fi episode.

more on plot later, i wasn't prepared to read a novel when i approached my puter today.

-- rina (hellorina@aol.com), February 03, 2005.

To be fair the firts ten chapters are more "Introduction"...

the story rellaypicks up around chapter 12, with chapter 11 beign setup for chapter 12...

But for now its goign to be slow.

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), February 03, 2005.

Below is the comlete collection of links to the curretn 4 threads, in case toy didnt notice chapters 1-3

http://greenspun.com/bboard/q-and-a-fetch-msg.tcl?msg_id=00CgBQ

http://greenspun.com/bboard/q-and-a-fetch-msg.tcl?msg_id=00Chb7

http://greenspun.com/bboard/q-and-a-fetch-msg.tcl?msg_id=00Ciwj

http://greenspun.com/bboard/q-and-a-fetch-msg.tcl?msg_id=00Ciwj

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), February 03, 2005.

Zarove, I've finally read the first two chapters. I'm sorry I'm so slow, but I used to be a cromagnon

-- Luke Juarez (hubertdorm@yahoo.com), February 09, 2005.

What are you now then? I happen to be a Pterosaur meself.

-- ZAROVE (ZAROFF3@JUNO.COM), February 09, 2005.

"I am not a horse; I am a man!"

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Readers,

Unfortunately this forum closed due to maintence problems with the server.

If you are interested in continuing a discussion, you can go to this board:

http://p221.ezboard.com/bthechristianforum

The Christian Forum

This was our back up board, but now we all relocated here.

Hope to see you there!

-- David Ortiz (cyberpunk1986@prodigy.net), July 14, 2005.

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-- rod (elreyrod@yahoo.com), February 09, 2005.