I thought the story was pretty good but it cant compare to any of Celious stories.

-- Rion Beyolve (twopacliveson@hotmail.com), March 05, 2000

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Yes, that is true, but my work doesn't even stand a chance against yours and celious's, you guys have that as hte french call it well.............idon't know.

-- Bloodshed (Bloodshed2@email.com), March 05, 2000.

Hey thanks a lot man.

-- Rion Beyolve (twopacliveson@hotmail.com), March 05, 2000.

Were you being sarcastic???

-- Bloodshed (Bloodshed2@email.com), March 05, 2000.

I am only in junior high, 6th grade: i should still be in intermediate but aare schools are goofed up in Minnesota.

-- Bloodshed (Bloodshed2@email.com), March 05, 2000.

rion, until this last story i would have agreed - celious's best work is head and shoulders above the rest. but this last chapter i liked a lot. if you would just take it through one more draft, and cleanse it of the most obvious spelling and punctuation errors, it would be every bit the equal of anything celious did.

even without the extra draft, i really liked this new chapter.

-- torey luvullo (dst10000@compuserve.com), March 05, 2000.

Hey Bloodshed, the schools in Detroit are fucked uped too. We have to get almost 14 inchs of snow to have a snow day. Whats worse is that my school, Clippert Acadamy, has stupid fuckers as teachers. I tell them my old school, Mcmillin, is so damn screwed I don't know (And I DON'T) my multip.table. Man, i'm 14 in 7th Grade. One of the really FUCKED UP teachers is Ms. Sher-dick, shes all like "You all so stupid God gonna came kill ya'll in June. Well, more like you kill yo selfs because yo no wanna go back to 7th Grade." And if you ask me, she watchs to much Sci-fi, because shes always doing this Scared Stragh(Can't spell because my IQ is very low for Human's, 21. The normal is 165. But then again, I HATE most all Humans and want NOTHING to do with the Planet-Killers.) robots are gonig to get you shit. And thats my 2 cents, wasted!

-- Wheel Gator (MyersDCM@email.msn.com), March 05, 2000.

OK, WE KNEW YOU WERE FUCKIN STUPID ALL ALONG!

-- GolemHater (?????@????.???), May 29, 2000.